Greg Pak
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Turned in a script that's taken me a couple of weeks to crack. As always, the trick was to focus on the most important emotional relationship in the story and move that to the forefront. Something I know! Something I've known for DECADES! Something I have to constantly relearn! Wheee! #writing
12:06 AM - Feb 16, 2023
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Matthew Dow Smith
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In response to Greg Pak.
I keep having to relearn that I need to throw out everything that doesn't revolve around the main emotional arc of the story. 30 years doing this. You'd think I wouldn't have to learn that every time I get to the second act of a story.
08:17 AM - Feb 16, 2023
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Greg Pak
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In response to Greg Pak.
I don't know if folks really see the subsequent posts in a thread, so this is kind of a note to myself, but it's important: the other thing with this script was figuring out how to take that central emotional relationship to the next level. To figure out the biggest way to raise the stakes.
12:44 AM - Feb 16, 2023
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Greg Pak
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In response to Greg Pak.
Not just enough to repeat the emotional conflict in serial storytelling. Gotta push it to the next level in each issue. Make it matter, move it forward.
12:45 AM - Feb 16, 2023
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