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#Poetry

damn daffodils
how dare they
remind me of you
as they sway
in the wind
the way you danced
as they reached
for the morning sun
the way you used to reach
for me
damn daffodils
still standing defiant
while all I can do
is watch my tears
fall
03:56 PM - Feb 13, 2023
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George Mercado
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Sucker punch? I am not sure it is but thank you for commenting on it.
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01:26 PM - Feb 18, 2023
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01:58 PM - Feb 18, 2023
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Not a problem. I have been told that I had / have a tendency of twisting the knife at the end of some of my pieces. I don't see it in this case. To me it was the tale of a man breaking & finally allowing his tears to fall
03:59 PM - Feb 18, 2023
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