Los Angeles Writers Group
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If you ever find yourself describing facial contortions, such as: his lips curled into a smile, DELETE IT. I must see this five times a week. Don't focus on facial contortions. Readers know what a smile is. Instead, say what kind of smile according to your POV character. (see comments for more)
02:00 PM - Feb 24, 2023 (Edited)
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Los Angeles Writers Group
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In response to Los Angeles Writers Group.
(continued) A mischievous smile. A dismissive smile. An empty smile. #writing #WritingCommunity #amwriting #FirstDraftCoach
02:00 PM - Feb 24, 2023 (Edited)
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