Mary JUSTICE FOR BREONNA
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The Duke and I which is the first book in the Bridgerton series was free on audible and now I know why. It reads like slightly better than normal fan fic. Too much "he said" "he replied" "he queried." The style is all over the place and it's giving 10th grade creative writing.
02:17 AM - Mar 02, 2024
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Mary JUSTICE FOR BREONNA
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The narration is giving nearly a pastiche but the dialogue is giving 21st century white lady. Victorian values are running amok in Georgian times which makes no sense. The sex is cringe. This is clearly to read on a beach when you are drunk.
02:24 AM - Mar 02, 2024
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There are so many terribly written books out there nowadays. And sometimes walking past the young adult section looks like a massive copy and paste operation...
Don't get me wrong, I love that publishers are no longer gatekeeping opportunities, but let's be honest, not everyone should write books.
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07:36 AM - Mar 02, 2024
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