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Critique update:

Quite a butchery😅
The biggest reason was that few cared to read the advisory blurb. Also, the chapter drops from the middle of the story without background.
There was one "right" person to read it.
01:08 PM - Apr 29, 2024
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Surprisingly having the same reading background as mine and as the story has a strong influence from these writers, it felt that his critique was most accurate. We were "speaking the same language" even though my writing was not perfect.
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01:08 PM - Apr 29, 2024
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