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Going through the critiques I got. Been away from it for a couple of days. Maybe it was not so bad as I thought after all 🤔 I Also got one more in the last minutes. All readers though, said the same thing, not knowing what happened previously made it a bit hard to understand which is true.
09:19 AM - May 01, 2024
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It is a repeating history event. Things happened almost the same in MC's past in 1st chapter.
Critiques pointed out different things, so I think it's due to readers' points of view. Some sentences need more work.
09:19 AM - May 01, 2024
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For emotional feedback, it was there 👍
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09:19 AM - May 01, 2024
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