George Mercado
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#Poetry

and she shines
as if she were
the grace of dawn
washing away
the shadows
in our souls
& in her light we see
the best of us
& those dreams
that have long called
our name
and she shines
& I weep
softly
for all those dreams
we've left behind
05:08 PM - Apr 26, 2023
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Rosie2cat T
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Your poetry makes me weep for our lost youth, and the dreams we nurtured, but were lost along the way to old age x
05:56 PM - Apr 26, 2023 (Edited)
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George Mercado
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I am sorry that it made you weep. My intention was to show how our past is their future...
thank you for reading it...
10:54 AM - Apr 27, 2023
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Rosie2cat T
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I'm old, so memories of my hopeful, full of promise youth, that never materialised, tend to make me cry.
Your poetry is beautiful & I thank you for sharing it. Hugs x
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05:12 PM - Apr 27, 2023
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George Mercado
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In response to Rosie2cat T.
I understand, I'll be 69 in a month..., so I am at a point where I'm both remembering my yesterdays & that tomorrow we all hope for our children with the understanding that we all live in through them, that they are our true legacy.
:)
08:50 AM - Apr 28, 2023
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