Marlo Garnsworthy
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I've rejected 5 PB manuscripts so far this afternoon, all with the same issue: a parent/adult solving the protagonist's problem & delivering a didactic (boring!) monologue. Easy pass.

Your protagonist needs to be the hero and solve the story-worthy problem.

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01:30 AM - Apr 11, 2023
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