Brett Stauffer
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The cat stares at nothing
Does she see the eternal Dao?
I, alas, cannot

#haiku
09:51 AM - Jun 22, 2023
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Jake Wasserman
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In response to Brett Stauffer.
Is your poem in fact
not actually haiku
intentionally?

Stirring, the cat notes
one thing at last eternal
Not the Tao? Not now?

Staring at the cat
I see nothing eternal
Alas, she does

The way the cat sees
is not the way to see her
or to see the way.
10:04 AM - Jun 22, 2023
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Brett Stauffer
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In response to Jake Wasserman.
Haiku is 5-7-5 only in middle school English class. In the real world it is free-form.
11:50 AM - Jun 22, 2023
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Megan Kotte
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In response to Brett Stauffer.
She's staring at ghosts
At the many many ghosts
She's staring at ghosts
09:58 AM - Jun 22, 2023
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